More writing...

Managed to add a couple of thousand words to my Femdom Cave book last night. Seemed like hard work, I guess ignoring it for two weeks isn't the way to keep the juices flowing. Still I'm over 21,000 words now and I'm sure I could make that a few more if I actually went back and filled in some of the finer details (which I'm not going to do until I've finished the first draft).
In my eagerness to include an earlier than planned cuckolding scene I've gone somewhat off my original plan, and to be honest I'd only planned so far into the book anyway, partly because I knew I'd never stick to it...
Hmm, and I still have to write the difficult scene that I put off writing before, only now it's from a different angle, which might make it a little easier, we'll see... maybe I can get some writing done this evening, after my appointment with Mistress Motivator!
Mmmm, Mistress R in lycra. Much more fun than walking, even with an iPod.

6th of June...

That's the last time I wrote any of my book. How can that be possible! Dammit, I was supposed to get so much done this week and it just hasn't happened. Mind you, in a way it's good because over the last fortnight I've come up with a nice little twist and stepped off the previously fairly linear story line a little. I've run my idea by Mistress R and she thinks it's a good next move as it presents an opportunity for an additional cuckolding scene.
Mistress R also commented to me the other day that she thinks I should try writing a normal book as she thinks I could easily write a better chic-lit book than Matt Dunn... and there's probably some actual money in it, hahaha!

Just received my latest book...

After reading about it on Mistress 160's website, I decided to order it and see if it really was as good as they claimed. I shall let you know in due course... in the meantime check out what she said about it here

BOOK REVIEW: The Dominatrix by Emma Allen

As someone who frets endlessly about making his stories believable, it's slightly annoying that Emma Allen's book 'The Dominatrix' falls into the usual trap of feeling 'convenient'. I don't want to spoil it for anyone so I can't really explain what I mean, but take it from me over the last couple of days I've been rolling my eyes a lot. Which is a shame, because for the most part this is a well written story that's definitely a cut above some of the guff I've read lately (Roy Gordon's 'Lust Call' springs to mind). The sex scenes are well written, albeit the whole secret door to a dungeon room thing makes me cringe a little bit. There's also one scene which, after making me roll my eyes, then made me wonder if the writer had realised what she'd written as the heroine 'Mistress Karen' goes from deep anal (without lube!) to deep throat in the space of seconds (hardly dominant woman behaviour I should have thought!), something which stands out from the page like a sore thumb given the otherwise fairly unremarkable nature of the sex scenes before it.
It's also quite a short book which to me feels like it could have done with a bit of fleshing out, and like I said, everything falls into place oh-so-conveniently, right from the very first page. But maybe that's how you are supposed to write a sex-novel, after all it's not going to be up for a Booker Prize is it? I just prefer a story that dots the i's and crosses the t's and explains things properly without relying too much on happy coincidences. All that said, if you're looking for a shortish sex novel with a Femdom theme, you could do a lot worse.

The Dominatrix is published by X Libris / Little Brown